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‘Ve~ How old do you think she is Doitsu?’ You hear an Italian voice and whimper slightly as your head is throbbing.

‘She can’z be zhaz old’ a German voice replied.

Suddenly you feel a cold towel being placed on your forehead. You slowly open your (e/c) eyes and see three men surrounding you. A Japanese looking man with brown eyes and black hair was the closest to you.  He was talking to a German looking man that had sleek blonde hair and blue eyes and, finally, an Italian man with Auburn hair and Amber eyes who was cooking something in the kitchen.

“Where am I?!” You think in panic.

Suddenly the Italian man came back into the room and looked at you.

‘Ve~! Germany! Japan! The Bella is awake!’ He says and smiles.  The German and Japanese men look at you.

“Ahhh Herro miss’ the Japanese man said, ‘My name is Honda Kiku.’

‘Are you feeling better?’ The Italian asked. ‘Oh! My-a name is Feliciano Vargas!’

‘I-I’m feeling okay, what happened to me?’ you ask as you slowly sit up.

‘Ve aren’z sure’ the German replied. ‘I’m Ludvig Beilschmidz by zhe vay.’

‘I-I’m (First Name) (Last Name)’ you say hesitantly.

‘Can you remember anything?’ Kiku asked.

You took the wet cloth off your forehead, despite the protests from the Axis countries and close your eyes.

~Le Flash Back/Dream~

You look around and see you were near a forest.  America was walking towards you, a sword in his hand and a scowl on his face.

‘A-Alfred what’s going on?’ you ask the older nation.  He didn’t say anything, but he raised the sword in his hand and slashed your cheek. You stumbled back and placed your hand on your cheek, tears forming in your eyes.

‘A-Alfred what did I-I do w-wrong?’ you asked and take a step towards America.
You heard him growl and you gasp as he hit you in the head with the flat part of the sword hard enough to knock you out.

~Back to the Present~

You gasp and open your eyes, putting your hands over your chest. Kiku who was sitting next to you jumped.
‘(First Name)-san’ he said and looked at you, ‘Are you arright? You ferr asreep earrier so Rudwig-san asked Fericaino-san to put you to bed and we were taking turns watching over you.’

You slowly nod and take a deep breathe. Suddenly Ludwig walked in.

‘Ahh. (First Name) you are avake.’ Ludwig said.

‘I-I remember what happened’ you said and tears formed in your eyes.

‘You do?’ Kiku asked.

You slowly nod and Feliciano appears at the doorway.

‘V-Ve~! What’s going on?’ he asked.

‘(First Name) remembers what happened’ Kiku said.

‘Vill you zell us (First Name)?’ Ludwig asked.

You nod and Ludwig and Feliciano sat down.

‘I-I don’t remember much but this is what I remember’ you said and told them what you remembered.

You look down as tears fall down your cheeks. Suddenly you were hugged and you looked up to see Feliciano hugging you.

‘Don’t worry Bella, we will protect you right?’ Feliciano asked.

You saw Ludwig nod and Kiku smile.

‘Thank you,’ you whispered and smiled.

~Le time skip~

You followed Ludwig, Feliciano and Kiku through the corridor. It had been ten years since you first met the Axis and you had recently found out you represented (Country name). Your (hair colour) hair had grown down to your waist. You fidgeted with your (favourite colour) shirt and sigh.

‘S-So everyone will be here?’ you asked.

‘Of course~!’ Feliciano said, ‘you will finally get to meet everyone Ve~!’

Soon enough you stopped in front of a huge wooden door, Kiku opened it and everyone looks at you and the rest of the Axis.  

‘Ve~! Hey everyone~’ Feliciano said and skipped over to another man that looked almost exactly like Feliciano.
You heard Ludwig whisper something in German and walk over to an albino while Kiku walked over to a Chinese looking man. You looked around nervously until you hear the door open and America walked in.

‘The hero is here!’ He said then spotted you.

Turning around you get the shock of your life.  ‘A-Alfred?!’ you said, taking a step back.

He looked at you and a smile appeared on his face.

‘(Nick Name)!!!’ He said and walked over to hug you.

Before he could hug you though, you ran over to Ludwig (who was the only one with a weapon) and hid behind him.

~The End~
This is my first AxisXReader. I wrote it a while ago too so it does suck. Anyway it does also include: Bewitched!AmericaXChild!Shy!Reader.

Hetalia belongs to: :iconhimaruyaplz:

I belong to: :iconchibicanadaplz:

You belong to: :iconsexyjapanplz: :iconsexygermanyplz: :iconsexyitalyplz:

The Story belongs to: :iconjessthepegasus: AKA Me.

The Story belongs to: :iconjessthepegasus:
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HetaliaRussiaFan Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2014  New member
OMG you got to tell me what happens!
ShadowWolfAshe Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2014  Student Artist
Before he could hug you though, you ran over to Ludwig (who was the only one with a weapon) and hid behind him.

~The End~

Me: WTF HAPPENS NEXT?! -rage party-
Wolverina22 Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2014  New member Student Writer
Wait... WHAT HAPPENS!?!?!?!?!?!?!?
fizzy-soda-pop Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2014  New member Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I am slightly confused.... pweeze explain why America was trying to hurt such a small girl?
LightElf2001 Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
According to the descripton I believe he was bewitched or taken over by some thing-a-ma-gig.
ibrose12 Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2014
Thedeadloxfreak101 Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2014
my big bro turns on me
then hugs me
TicciToby0194 Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2014  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
Me (Representing Australia...IDK. I like that continent): Get the fruck away, America. *Birtchslap*
seerofheros Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
Me(representing Haiti) : :iconpissedoffplz: pa gen okenn! Fuck ou estipid!
(Used Google translate don't kill me)
HCthecreeper Featured By Owner Edited Jun 15, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
*takes out creepy pasta army* IM READY >: D
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